I Will Restore The Land

This is my artwork
This is pony Urahana
Her story is.. Urahana and Xotri once lived in an ancient city in the sky. Where every pony was a special kind of pegasis and each has a different colour wing tip. The coloured wing tips gave every pony a special, mysterious power Which would help them protect the land. Xotri and Urahana are twin ponies who were fillies at the time. One day dark clouds covered the land and these shadow creatures started taking over the city. The pegasis ponies couldn`t fight against the shadow creatures, there was no pony who had any special powers to help against shadows nor could they attack them. The land ended up being taken over by shadow beings along with their king.The land starting to shake and crumble. Urahana and Xotri both fell down to the surface where they got seperated. Urahana woke up in the middle of a huge grass field, not even knowing where she was or what was going on? Scared and confused she looked around for the nearest town where she thought she could find help, knew anything about her city and what happened to her her sister and maybe a place to to stay. She came across ponyville, when she asked for help or any info on the situation, no pony know what she was talking about.Years pass and Urahana was helping around ponyville. She did all the research she could and found nothing, she had only recently been reunited with her sister. She spent her days in ponyville like every the other pony while keeping a look out for anything she could find to help her get back or remember home. Also at the time she still had a blank flank. One day she went out to the fields to relax. She then came across a small black shadow blob on the ground. She was in the middle of the field and there was nothing that could've made the shadow. Suddenly her wings started glowing, confused at what was going on the shadow blob suddenly shone brightly. When urahana looked back up to see what had happened she saw a glass shard piece floating there. When she took a closer look at it, she could see that inside it showed a small piece of land and she suddenly remembered that was a small piece, part of the city she was from. When she touched it with her hove it shone brightly and dissapeared into the sky. It was then that she knew what she had to do. She also noticed that she got her cutie mark too.
Im going to change/add parts of the story when I completely know what will happen. I really don't want to sound like im copying part of season 3 of MLP ><""""" My story is different in most ways than what they aired in season 3 >w<"" For those wondering why I chose and stuck with shadows, I based them off of the paranormal events going on in my house.
Anyways, I hope you guys like this >w</)~~
Please comment and tell me what you think~♪ :3